Author: AppleMIN
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/goodbye_AS/
Status: One-Shot//Completed
Reviewer: Ms. McFartPants (Linlin Vito)
Note: Author should know that I do not know her and vice versa. Me, the reviewer, have nothing against the author. If you find the comments too harsh or mean, sorry but I'm just doing this to improve your skills for future stories. Thank you for requesting in Untouchable Desires.
Title: 4/5
: I wasn't that impressed with the title. Yeah- it was fantastic but I guess you could do something better than that!
Forewords: 9/10
: So this was the continuation! Girl, if you just told me earlier that "Remember Me" is going to have a sequel, then I shouldn't had given you a low grade on the review. The forewords was so good. You actually found a way to describe the first person's perspectives by just writing simple sentences. So creative!
First Impression: 9/10
: Like before, I am still impressed with your poster! And the font color was good, but maybe you could change the background. It's just my opinion; but I guess it's kinda bright.. well, for me.
Plot/Story line: 12/15
: Okay.. I have to be serious about this. The plot nearly made me cry- and I'm not joking about this. The way how the song fits so perfectly with the plot was just so mesmerizing. But it was quite confusing for me; first I thought that Anna took the surgery, but then as time passes, Sungmin finds out that she didn't.. and now he has an album?!
Flow: 5/5
: The story's flow was, as usual, perfect!
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
: Now you made me proud! Your creativity was so wide- I mean your imagination. I'm so impressed with the story.. and also the writer, of course!
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary/Punctuation: 15/15
: Like before, I didn't notice any wrong spellings or grammings. :D Good job!
Writing Style: 8/10
: When I first read your story- Remember Me- I thought that the deep thoughts were just written by you because of the mood of the story. But then, after reading this, I think that your style is quite difficult to catch. I mean, the twists are always appearing late.
Characterization: 10/10
: The characters were the best of the best. Their roles are so good and so awesome!
Communication with Readers: 4/5
: One quick tip, you should use words that are not so deep because kids that have the same age as me, hehehe, will have difficulties in understanding it.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
: I also love this fanfic! Never give up and continue writing stories! Anyway, what are the other links for your other fanfics! Please send me all of them at linlinvito@yahoo.ca.
Subtotal: 91/100
Bonus: 4/5
Total: 95/100
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/goodbye_AS/
Status: One-Shot//Completed
Reviewer: Ms. McFartPants (Linlin Vito)
Note: Author should know that I do not know her and vice versa. Me, the reviewer, have nothing against the author. If you find the comments too harsh or mean, sorry but I'm just doing this to improve your skills for future stories. Thank you for requesting in Untouchable Desires.
Title: 4/5
: I wasn't that impressed with the title. Yeah- it was fantastic but I guess you could do something better than that!
Forewords: 9/10
: So this was the continuation! Girl, if you just told me earlier that "Remember Me" is going to have a sequel, then I shouldn't had given you a low grade on the review. The forewords was so good. You actually found a way to describe the first person's perspectives by just writing simple sentences. So creative!
First Impression: 9/10
: Like before, I am still impressed with your poster! And the font color was good, but maybe you could change the background. It's just my opinion; but I guess it's kinda bright.. well, for me.
Plot/Story line: 12/15
: Okay.. I have to be serious about this. The plot nearly made me cry- and I'm not joking about this. The way how the song fits so perfectly with the plot was just so mesmerizing. But it was quite confusing for me; first I thought that Anna took the surgery, but then as time passes, Sungmin finds out that she didn't.. and now he has an album?!
Flow: 5/5
: The story's flow was, as usual, perfect!
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
: Now you made me proud! Your creativity was so wide- I mean your imagination. I'm so impressed with the story.. and also the writer, of course!
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary/Punctuation: 15/15
: Like before, I didn't notice any wrong spellings or grammings. :D Good job!
Writing Style: 8/10
: When I first read your story- Remember Me- I thought that the deep thoughts were just written by you because of the mood of the story. But then, after reading this, I think that your style is quite difficult to catch. I mean, the twists are always appearing late.
Characterization: 10/10
: The characters were the best of the best. Their roles are so good and so awesome!
Communication with Readers: 4/5
: One quick tip, you should use words that are not so deep because kids that have the same age as me, hehehe, will have difficulties in understanding it.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
: I also love this fanfic! Never give up and continue writing stories! Anyway, what are the other links for your other fanfics! Please send me all of them at linlinvito@yahoo.ca.
Subtotal: 91/100
Bonus: 4/5
Total: 95/100
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