Loving You Hurts Review

Story Title: Loving You Hurts
Author: saranghaeyo
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/saranghaeyo_81/
Status: On-Going
Reviewer: Ms. McFartPants xP (Linlin Vito)

Note: Author should know that I do not know her and vice versa. Me, the reviewer, have nothing against the author. If you find the comments too harsh or mean, sorry but I'm just doing this to improve your skills for future stories. Thank you for requesting in Untouchable Desires.

Title: 5/5
; The title matches the plot perfectly! It's unique but at the same time, it's not that too eye-catchy. But I'll give you a 5.

Forewords: 6/10
; Good job on putting the character's info. But you should add stuffs like what's the story's about or what's the genre or something like that.

First Impression: 8/10
; The poster was very attractive. It also matched the background but I don't think the font colors match it too. You could change the colors to pink or gray or black- or something like that.

Plot/Story line: 12/15
; The plot is fantastic- it was so good. It always made me think what will happen next and there's always a good mx that made it attractive. Good job!

Flow: 3/5
; The plot was I think is too fast. It made me repeat reading the chapters so I could understand it.

Creativity/Originality: 7/10
; I think the story's plot was too cliche. Gangster plus love triangle- I don't think it's original. But the plot was so creative.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary/Punctuation: 10/15
; A lot of gramming and spelling mistakes. Mind going back to the chapters and repost them.

Writing Style: 8/10
; It wasn't that good, but it's still okay.

Characterization: 9/10
; AWESOME! So speechless right now.. sorry. xP

Communication with Readers: 5/5
; x.o.x.o.

Overall Enjoyment: 3/5


Subtotal: 77/100

Bonus: 5/5

Total: 82/100