Different Side Of Love Review

Story Title: Different Side Of Love
Author: Shadow Yin
Link: http://winglin.net/fanfic/SYdifferent/
Status: One-Shot//Completed
Reviewer: Linlin Vito (Ms. McFartPants)

Note: Author should know that I do not know her and vice versa. Me, the reviewer, have nothing against the author. If you find the comments too harsh or mean, sorry but I'm just doing this to improve your skills for future stories. Thank you for requesting in Untouchable Desires.

Title: 5/5
: The title is a perfect fit for your storyline and it's quite appealing.

Forewords: 10/10
: The forewords was perfect also. I know that it only contains the idea or a hint of what will the plot or story be, and sometimes, the characters isn't really that important. The forewords was so great- keep up the good work, my friend!

First Impression: 8/10
: I'm not that happy when I entered this link in my laptop. What made me smile was your poster; I didn't like it, I admit but the quotes that are inside it is really good.

Plot/Story line: 14/15
: The plot is, okay... But I think it's lacking something. I know it's just a one-shot but I think it's still missing something; I just can't remember what it is.

Flow: 4/5
: I think it's quite fast- because the readers are still understand how Donghae lives his life then all of the sudden, his brother dies.

Creativity/Originality: 9/10
: I've seen some fanfics around winglin that has the same title with yours. But your idea is the best one. It's not about a couple love thing, but it's the different side of love(just like the title.)

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary/Punctuation: 13/15
: I've noticed a lot of mistakes in your story. It wasn't that noticeable but I noticed it and I think you should look through it again and maybe you'll see them also.

Writing Style: 9/10
: I loved the writing style, it's the perfect match for your plot. But I'm not that comfortable with the (majority of single)paragraphs being seperated to the others.

Characterization: 10/10
: I love the characters and their roles! :D

Communication with Readers: 5/5
: It really connects to other readers. ^^

Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
: I didn't enjoy it because I thought it's going to make me cry but it didn't. But other than that, it was good!

Subtotal: 91/100

Bonus: 4/5
: Because you deserve it!

Total: 95/100