Story Title: Remember me
Author: AppleMIN
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/rememberme_AS/
Status: One-Shot//Completed
Reviewer: Ms. McFartPants (Linlin Vito)
Note: Author should know that I do not know her and vice versa. Me, the reviewer, have nothing against the author. If you find the comments too harsh or mean, sorry but I'm just doing this to improve your skills for future stories. Thank you for requesting in Untouchable Desires.
Title: 5/5
: The title was so perfect for the story. It is also appealing or eye-catching.
Forewords: 9/10
: The Forewords was good, even though there's no introductions of the characters. I love the way how you organized it, and the way you wrote it.
First Impression: 10/10
: I was really impressed with the poster. So good, it made me so speechless right now!
Plot/Story line: 13/15
: I love the plot! The thing with Kira getting angry with Anna was good, it made the entire story go around. But there's a slight problem; 1. you just sneaked the thing where Anna figures out her sickness and 2. the ending. We didn't had the chance to know what was their friend's reaction about it.
Flow: 5/5
: The story's flow was perfect! Not too fast, not too slow..
Creativity/Originality: 9/10
: The idea was cliche, but the way you wrote it and the way you've edited it to make it better and more awesome is too creative!
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary/Punctuation: 15/15
: I didn't notice any mistakes, so I guess it's a perfect 15!
Writing Style: 9/10
: Your writing style is so good! So speechless right now; sorry.
Characterization: 10/10
: I love how the characters interact with the other characters. And Kira's role was brilliant!
Communication with Readers: 5/5
: I just love this fanfic! So good! So creative!
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
Subtotal: 94/100
Bonus: 4/5
Total: 98/100
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